The above is an example of how not to write. Keeping your sentences concise will make them easy to read.
[jetpack-related-posts]Long Winded Documents
A sentence which runs over several lines may be grammatically perfect but is likely to be unnecessarily complex and include several sub clauses which mean the reader has to concentrate extremely hard to understand the meaning and thus increase the chance that they will stop reading before they reach the full stop at the end of the sentence.
